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…….You shouldn't have done that.

You took my eyes.
Do you know what that's like?
I don't.
My name?
You want…my name?
I don't own a name…I was given a name.

Who is BEN?
It isn't me—it wasn't mine.
BEN DROWNED…that's what they heard.
DROWNED…but where?
BEN had no body…BEN was a body.
Why am I alone?
I saw him for the first time…
From that second onward, I wanted to be with him…

But he didn't want to be with me…
He never wants to be with me.

He summoned me again! I feel so happy!
It's strange, this feeling…I've never experienced it before.
He values me; I KNOW he does!
We're both cut from the same cloth—it's only natural we'd be together.
Oh, it seems like he needs to go do something…I suppose I'll wait here, then.
I'll wait here, like I'm meant to.
He won't like me, otherwise…

He ran off again, today.
He left me here. Alone.
He never calls me by the name…
The name BEN.
I never understood that—WHY did BEN drown? How did BEN drown? I puzzle over this when he goes running off.

I want to talk to him, but I can't speak. He never talks to me.

I'm so lonely…why is BEN alone?

He cheated. It was supposed to end…but he cheated. I have a feeling BEN isn't happy, and neither am I…

He didn't come to protect me, either—I was left alone. I am always…alone…

I'm going to follow him…I refuse to sit still any longer.

The Skull Kid with the mask…he's alone, too…I know this, but I don't know why. BEN plans to follow the boy until he can no longer follow…

BEN doesn't feel tired—I'm not sure why. He's getting tired, though; he screams a lot. He doesn't want me around, but won't tell me why. I followed him to a tree, and still he rejected me, even when we were the only two there. I don't like being ignored.

He burned today. It made me happy.
I'm not sure why. He needed me, at a time.

I followed him down to the ocean and waited for him in the water…but BEN wasn't DROWNED by the sea…I feel there is more to that than what he's revealing.

I…BENDROWNED…in tears of blood…because my eyes were taken. I was finally blinded, and now I can't follow him any longer…it makes me sad…I try to smile despite this, but still he screams. What happened to our partnership? Am I nothing…to him?

He was burned again today…his spine was broken, and he sagged sideways. I found him again, but still he ran. He left BEN to stand alone…the Skull Kid told me this would happen…I could only obey. BEN was a part of him, after all.

Even though my eyes are gone and I am DROWNED…I'm glad you did that. You gave me more time to live…and perhaps, it will undo the damage that is done.

Now, it is YOUR TURN to watch from afar as BEN leaves you to stand, lifeless as you are. The Moon and Kid are the only ones who understand me, and the Salesman…I hope you are happy…because I want to be with you forever.

And you can't run.
I researched on BEN and found information on him that disturbed me...I hadn't been creeped out before, but it was true--I did research it, and I felt disturbed and sad for BEN.

So I made a tribute to him.

P.S.: I encourage you to play the warped Song of Healing while you read this.
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Dotty12345 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Zelda206 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:heart::love:Thank you so much!:love::heart::happybounce:
Dotty12345 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wwelcome <3
otakusoul22 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012
I see you have entered the world of Creepypasta. lol

BEN is an awesome story but the Pokemon stories seem to be better IMO especially the killer ghost character from the fake Pokemon Black story.
otakusoul22 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012
Whoops sorry for the double post i thought i accidentally clicked outside of the box and not on the post button. lol
otakusoul22 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012
Lol i see you entered the Creepypasta world.

Still has nothing on the Ghost from the Gameboy color Pokemon Black story but Ben was still a good story.
dxabyss Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012
Care to use Curse?
triforcebearer15 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh, I didn't NEED to sleep tonight :iconohyouplz:
CHBININJA Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Student Artist
Um who is Ben?
Zelda206 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
BEN, not 'Ben'--BEN is the lifeless version of Link that appears to be the main antagonist of a Majora's Mask conspiracy that only happens in the glitch cartridge when you have 'Dawn of a New Day'. It consists of 'cheating' at the end of the Final Day and something to do with speeding forwards in time in the Watch Tower where the old man resides.

Crazy stuff happens, and BEN follows you around. Weird messages pop up, and an inverted Song of Healing plays while all of this spooky crap occurs. There are some videos of it on YouTube.
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